Marijuana Paper Response

The essay that I had written on legalizing and taxing Marijuana was not one of my best writings. I think that my paper was persuasive, and had detail as to how it coud truely help our country, but i felt that I needed more back up information. People need to see the importance of Marijuana. Not only Marijuana, but Hemp as well. The entire Cannabis plant could help save our world. Hemp has well over fifty thousand uses. I wisht that I would have talked about Hemp more in my paper. I should have discussed the importances of both of the substances.
I felt that the most important part of my paper was when I discussed how much money our country could save by not having to deal with the punishment expenses. I felt as if that part was a real eye opener. All of the facts that I had stated actually make people re-think the situation. I also feel as if my conclusion was pretty strong. People are going to do what they want, when they want, and how they want. I do, however feel that I could have made my paper a lot better. I wish I would have added more detail and facts, becuase though I did present a lot of facts, I don't feel as if I had persuaded people enough.